Princessssss

Reaction to “I believe” essay.

       I really liked this essay. I wish i had the skills to be able to write likes this. I love the way she added things that didn’t really make sense but then were tied into the concept of her paper by the end. She didn’t use words that were the normal descriptive vocabulary someone would use. The way she wrote her essay was very free-flowing it was easy to listen to and didn’t have and paragraphs that felt out of place or that they didn’t relate back to her main topic sentence.  It was fun to he story about why she lives the way she does. It was a good combination of her personal life with her husband and her feelings towards the world. She was not pushy to try and make others feel the way she does but the way she describes her feelings could make someone be inspired to live the way she does.

Tomorrow

1. I think that he hooks the reader by really engaging them in his life. He talked about what he was going through he said that he heard his parents talking. Atomaticly i thought about what parents normally talk about and then he said its not what they normally talk about. He said it they were talking about an issue that would really effect his life.

2. He talks about what his dad is thinking about how his generation left the world for his sons generation. He goes to talk about topics that a lot of people are worried about right now.When people think about the bad things that are going on in the world right now people get emotional and want to try and solve them.

3.He uses his thoughts about what all we have gone through and not only the negative but also the positive. To every negative event there is a positive to fall after.

4. I think that he chose the title because this is how he See’s the future. His dad was thinking about what all the bad things that he was leaving behind. But the son was thinking about the positive as time goes on we will get better.